First draft!

 After many bumps such as music, our ideas clashing, and changes to original ideas, we came up with our first draft for the script that mainly entails the dialogue and specific scenes, and we will make the final draft with the specific music and cuts soon!

SCRIPT! 

Characters are Sarah, Bonnie, the killer 

Scene 1-getting ready 

*Credits during scene 1, introduces the characters, producers, and music by* 

Sarah: *Beautiful sigh, stretch* 

Bonnie: *wakes up late and checks phone, sees she is late, groan* Ughhhh 

Sarah: *get ready & does makeup slowly with calm music* 

*Graphic match cut to Bonnie's makeup brush* 

 

Bonnie: *doing makeup*  

Sarah:*knocking on door* Bonnie we gotta go! 

Bonnie: *Yells over loud music* COMING!!!!!  

*click of seat belt (j cut)* zoom out, seatbelt 

Scene 2-car 

Sarah: you gotta wake up earlier sis 

Bonnie:  Ugh be grateful I”m even taking you, you know how much I dislike the beach and the sun 

Sarah: whatevs just drive! 

*Cue music- kiss me by sixpence none the richer. Diegetic to non-diegetic “you wear those shoes, and I will wear that dress.” Then raise the volume goes non diegetic, beat drop “oh, kiss me beneath the milky twilight.” 

 

Scene 3-beach 

Establishing shot of beach 

*us setting up towel and music really quick* 

Bonnie: *lays on beach towel reading and listening to music* 

Sarah: I’m going to the water, come on loser!! *goes towards the water* 

Bonnie: *scoffs*  I’ll be right there 

*Swims around* 

 

Scene 4- death 

Sarah: *goes back to shore* 

Sarah: Girl there is no way that book is this interesting, I’ve been in the water for 30 minutes, get up!! 

*silence* 

Sarah: ugh and now you’re ignoring me?? What is your problem!! 

*flips her around* 

Bonnie: *has a knife to her chest, wide open eyes*/*wounds, blood drooping* 

Sarah: *intake breath, crash zoom to mouth area, wide mouth*  

*black out* 

L cut scream + title 

Scene 5- time skip 

Sarah: *picks up ringing phone* hello? 

Unknown: Is this Bonnie? 

Sarah: Haven't you heard? Bonnie died three years ago. 

*END*